[Ftffacilitationteam] Draft proposal for 2009: please read and comment

Jue Feb 12 21:07:55 GMT+2 2009

Dear Marcela,

I think overall this is good. The language needs to be cleaned-up a bit,  
with an eye towards consistency in particular e.g Climate Change or climate  
change).  Who has written it?  In first instance I see no mention of  gender, for 
example, even in the Background on the role of women which  was elemental in 
'92, and framing it within the context of sustainable  development. Would be 
good to include some language on the links with  gender.  Also, until the end, 
there is no connection with the critical  issue at the moment - the financial 
and economic crisis, funding for climate  change. In Doha this was included in 
the Outcome Document, so it  is very relevant to the discussions today.  I 
think the Face-to-Face should  be worded more emphatically:  "The group strongly 
suppports/encourages a Face to Face meeting in 2009 to consolidate its  
leadership for this group". --- or whatever point to  stress.   

I think there maybe a better way of addressing the vast importance of the  
issue rather stating it in what may be interpreted as an  assumption ---yet, not 
to diminish the importance of the issue--

It  is widely acknowledged by the development, environment and human rights  
community that climate change is one of, or the, critical issue in 2009.   
Perhaps, " It is widely acknowledged by the development, environment and  
human rights community that climate change is one of most critical issues for  
2009, with many arguing it is the top issue to tackele in 2009."  
As  the worldâ€™s largest social movement with coalitions in more than 100 
countries,  we believe it is vital that GCAP adds its weight and mobilisation 
potential to  the growing movement on climate change in 2009.  

It's hard to measure these, hard to say " the world's largest" without  
inviting criticism. I'm not even sure you mean GCAP or climate change followers.  
Just needs to be clarified.  Better to write " As one of the world's  largest 
social movements,..."

And finally, remind me who are the members of the CCWG because I only see  
your name below.  I think we had three spaces.

Hope this is helpful.

Saludos,
Rosa

In a message dated 2/12/2009 1:28:40 P.M. Eastern Standard Time,  
Marcela.Ballara en fao.org writes:

Dera  All: Enclosed  in english and spanish, the Climate Change  Working  
Group 2009 Plan of Action: 
Any contributions  are welcome.  
Marcela 

Amigas en espaÃ±ol e inglÃ©s,  el Plan de Trabajo  para 2008 del  Grupo 
Tematico de Cambio Climatoco. Cualquir sugerencia es  bienvenida

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Oficina Regional de AmÃ©rica  Latina y el Caribe  
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Subject: Draft proposal for 2009: please read and  comment

Dear  friends, 

As requested on the phone  conference earlier this week, I have drafted a 
very brief (2 pages) proposal  outlining the key actions for the GCAP Climate 
Change working group in 2009  including some context and members names. 

Please comment to me or the whole group on this strategy by January  23. 

Many thanks 
Ben 

(Castellano de Google Translate)     Queridos amigos, 

SegÃºn lo solicitado en el  telÃ©fono de conferencia a principios de esta 
semana, he elaborado una  muy breve (2 pÃ¡ginas) propuesta se esbozan las medidas 
clave para el  GCAP grupo de trabajo sobre el Cambio ClimÃ¡tico en 2009 y entre 
ellos  algunos miembros contexto nombres. 

Por favor, a mÃ comentario o  todo el grupo en esta estrategia en enero de 
23. 

Muchas gracias  
Ben

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